February 2017

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Flat vs. Rich Storylines

Watch “Passengers” and “The Lego Batman Movie” and you’ll notice a stark difference in the storylines. In “Passengers,” there’s only a single story and that...
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Revealing the Hero’s Deception

Right before Act III, the hero’s life completely falls apart. That’s usually the point where the hero is isolated and alone while the villain is...
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The Midpoint and the Twist

In every story, the hero pursues a straightforward goal and gets it at the midpoint. Then suddenly everything falls apart because the story gets twisted...
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The Ending of “Dr. Strange”

The ending of any movie must be appropriate. If the ending of “Thelma and Louise” ending with Thelma and Louise engaging in a massive shootout...
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Keep Making the Promise Bigger

Every movie promises something to the audience. An action film promises hand to hand combat, gunfire, and sometimes car chases and explosions. Whatever promise a...
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Avoiding On-the-Nose Dialogue

The surest sign of a novice screenwriter is dialogue where characters say exactly what’s on their mind. Imagine a love scene between two people where...
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Emotion + Story

There’s an interesting book called “The Impact Equation” that focuses on helping people refine their ideas. While the book isn’t about screenwriting, you can still...
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Learning from Women Screenwriters

As a broad generalization, male screenwriters tend to focus on physical conflict while female screenwriters tend to focus on emotional conflict. So if you’re a male,...
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Subtext Makes a Scene More Compelling

The dullest scene is one where nothing happens. Imagine two people driving in a car and not saying a word. Static action, like sitting in...
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Why “Passengers” Failed

“Passengers” is the latest example of a disappointing movie. While it can be inspiring to watch great movies, it can also be educational to watch...
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